Your ramp is more redundant than artifact ramp and you can diversify it over lands and creatures so as to be hard to shut down
What I did was take a simple idea like the "Card to Pocket" and translate it into something I knew my younger audiences (and in many ways people my age) would enjoy and connect with
Doctor Who Commander Deck Timey-Wimey The Timey-Wimey deck immerses players in the Doctor Who universe, focusing on time manipulation and suspend mechanics
then moved on to Black and Red, and finally finish the review with Green, Multicolor, Colorless, and Lands
60 damage for every Pokemon in your opponent's field with an ability might not sound amazing on paper (or digital screen), but when you think just how many decks these days are stacked with cards that are there first and foremost for their abilities, we dare say there are plenty of instances in which Zeraora can clean house for up to 360 damage
It's cool, but not the best